Mighty fine character LoreForged, but you might be a bit short on limbs to be a proper squid. Was this intentional or an oversight?
Also, I understand that you were asking for 12 players, does this include the 6 starting amount or was it 12 additional?
Edit: Also, while my character could theoretically fill a shipwright spot in the Pinstripe Pirates, I'm liking the Virtuoso Pirates a bit better, because the idea of leaving every island in ecological ruins after we leave, between the weather control and overgrowth of non-native and possibly hazardous plant life amuses me oh so very much. That and the character is more of a doctor then shipwright, as while he has enough skill to whip up a fully functional galleon as a standard action without too much trouble, it would still be a sub-standard (no apologies for the pun) ship. I'm not really worried, the only other doctor applicant's concept has been nixed so if no one else applies in that spot I'm nearly assured to secure it.
I'd happily join up with either crew, but I get the feeling that Zini's carnival suits would horribly clash with the sharp (I'm assuming) looks of the Pinstripe Pirates. A few of said suits have stripes, if that helps :P
Also, I've edited his app to add his goals, and a tweak to the backstory so the crew can come to him and not vice-versa.
If anyone's interested in looking at my sheet here it is, it's almost done, just need to fill in his minion list. I know I'm not privy to the creation details just yet, but it's PL 10 and anything more exotic about the guidelines can be changed. If anyone spots an error or just something I may of forgotten to include, please say something. http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetvie...sheetid=255824
I'm thinking that the +20 toughness modifier is a bit much, despite the zero defense. What do you guys say? Should I swap the defensive roll for some dodge focus?
I'm sure you have enough applications at this point, but I honestly couldn't help myself with this one. I've had this character in mind for a long time and felt compelled to post it after reading Fri's description of Mary Collette Bell, The Solemn Gunslinging Orchestra. I was rather stunned to see a lot of my ideas reflected in that character.
Trittiak, the Gun-Man
The connection between this character and Fri's Mary Bell is the fact that the entire character was designed around a single idea: the phrase "Shotgun Opera". The end result was that all of his attacks are named after the weapon he creates and a musical term of some kind. Examples of which are: Shotgun opera, Pistol note, and Sniper Lyric. I just thought it was a little strange to see similar ideas in different characters... perhaps there's some subconscious connection between firearms and music...