Alright, I like it. After this next adventure, I'll be sure to find a way to give Kiko the big reveal she deserves, no matter what direction you as players choose to go in. I have ambitious plans for two intertwined story arches coming up, and there will plenty of opportunities for you as players to choose your path, rather than the slightly "railroaded" direction I feel I've been pushing you lately.
As far as the parents things go, I'd like to flesh them out more, because there are a couple of scenes coming up they could possibly show up in. What are their feelings towards corporations, non-humans, and the Empire? You said they have become wealthy. Is it a result of the Empire's rise, or has it been harmed by it? Clearly they are not nobility, but I'm going to assume they are still rather powerful and influential on Alderaan. What are her feelings towards her parents? The vibe I get from the background is that she found them suffocating, but does she miss them?