The last sentence in the "Player Characters" section of "Races in Farland":
The highlighted word should be "of."
In the first paragraph of the "Dwarves" section:
Replace that first comma with a semicolon, or make two separate sentences. Add a comma after "however."
Quote:
In any case, how your race is treated depends heavily on where you venture in the continent of Farland, whether your character goes to or lives in the Liberated Kingdoms of Kale, Kelerak, and Daven, or the Occupied Kingdoms or Zeland, Orland, and Farland. |
In the first paragraph of the "Dwarves" section:
Quote:
They do speak the same language, however the hill dwarves use the Mithhaud alphabet, while mountain dwarves use the Wawmar alphabet. |