Ok, about your character sheet.
Paul has 100 xp too many. Regardless of how many Drawbacks you choose to take, you cannot have a starting XP level of greater than 800. You have 900 xp worth of Class Advances and Assets, so you need to lose something from that. Since you don't have a pistol of any kind at the moment, then Pistol Weapon Training might make an easy loss.
Otherwise, I think that you're good to go. Feel free to create your character sheet thread when ready.