Otomo Kohaku
Concept:
The youngest of the family and followed by suspicions of her parentage, Otomo Kohaku has much to prove in the eyes of family, sensei, and all those who watch the predators of the courts with sharpened knives and poisoned words. With so much riding on her and so many that cannot truly be trusted, Kohaku has become somewhat paranoid and easily pushed towards either offensive or defense based upon the demeanor of those she deals with. A trait that will no doubt prove invaluable in the darker aspects of the Otomo family's duties to the jade throne.
Those nerves and anxieties have only become more pronounced with her inclusion in the Topaz championship as the representative of her family. While there is little doubt to her talent one must wonder if somewhere in her is the will to truly drive her words and deeds home and bring glory to the rich legacy inherent in her blood.
Writing Sample:
"What!?" the small girl shouted in surprise as she felt the news of her selection slam into her chest. It set her notoriously high tension nerves jangling as she wondered which one of her siblings, or maybe her uncles, or that one aunt, had set this all up to see her fall even further from the graces of her parents and colleagues. "M-my apologies, sensei-sama, but I'm not sure why I was chosen over Daichi-san or maybe Aini-san...?" she said with a small note of uncertainty in her voice as she bowed her head to accentuate the apologies and her own humble opinions of herself. She wasn't ready, she knew that and the tournament was always dominated by the bushi. It was a historical precedent only broken on rare occasions by some exceptional shugenja. As far as she knew no courtier had ever won the championship and that only made her fear the consequences all the more.
Such internal recollections and deliberations only made it all the more embarrassing when she felt the light prod of a sheathed weapon against her shoulder.
"Despite your inadequacies, Otomo-san, you are one of the most talented students to walk into this dojo in a very long time. You should remember, however, that by envisioning defeat before you have even begun you only sabotage your future efforts. Fortunately, such decisions have been taken from your hands and you are to attend the championship as an active participant to represent this dojo and your family." Her sensei said with a finality in his tone that only had her heart and paranoid fancies moving faster and faster within her.
"Yes, Sensei-sama... how much time is there?" she asked tentatively and felt the stone in her stomach gain weight as he answered.
"Four weeks, I suggest you pay more attention next time we meet with Seppun-san about your education in personal defense... You may go now." He said with a shallow bow to his charge. One which was returned far more deeply by Kohaku as she scrambled out to get her rest. Her mind still spinning out elaborate thoughts on who might be trying to so publicly ruin her before her career could have even begun.
Flexibility:
In general, I'm happy to change details, twist around mechanics, and even provide whole new characters to better facilitate flow of play and a reasonably harmonious player group. The latter, though, is a bit of an extreme case.
The youngest of the family and followed by suspicions of her parentage, Otomo Kohaku has much to prove in the eyes of family, sensei, and all those who watch the predators of the courts with sharpened knives and poisoned words. With so much riding on her and so many that cannot truly be trusted, Kohaku has become somewhat paranoid and easily pushed towards either offensive or defense based upon the demeanor of those she deals with. A trait that will no doubt prove invaluable in the darker aspects of the Otomo family's duties to the jade throne.
Those nerves and anxieties have only become more pronounced with her inclusion in the Topaz championship as the representative of her family. While there is little doubt to her talent one must wonder if somewhere in her is the will to truly drive her words and deeds home and bring glory to the rich legacy inherent in her blood.
Writing Sample:
"What!?" the small girl shouted in surprise as she felt the news of her selection slam into her chest. It set her notoriously high tension nerves jangling as she wondered which one of her siblings, or maybe her uncles, or that one aunt, had set this all up to see her fall even further from the graces of her parents and colleagues. "M-my apologies, sensei-sama, but I'm not sure why I was chosen over Daichi-san or maybe Aini-san...?" she said with a small note of uncertainty in her voice as she bowed her head to accentuate the apologies and her own humble opinions of herself. She wasn't ready, she knew that and the tournament was always dominated by the bushi. It was a historical precedent only broken on rare occasions by some exceptional shugenja. As far as she knew no courtier had ever won the championship and that only made her fear the consequences all the more.
Such internal recollections and deliberations only made it all the more embarrassing when she felt the light prod of a sheathed weapon against her shoulder.
"Despite your inadequacies, Otomo-san, you are one of the most talented students to walk into this dojo in a very long time. You should remember, however, that by envisioning defeat before you have even begun you only sabotage your future efforts. Fortunately, such decisions have been taken from your hands and you are to attend the championship as an active participant to represent this dojo and your family." Her sensei said with a finality in his tone that only had her heart and paranoid fancies moving faster and faster within her.
"Yes, Sensei-sama... how much time is there?" she asked tentatively and felt the stone in her stomach gain weight as he answered.
"Four weeks, I suggest you pay more attention next time we meet with Seppun-san about your education in personal defense... You may go now." He said with a shallow bow to his charge. One which was returned far more deeply by Kohaku as she scrambled out to get her rest. Her mind still spinning out elaborate thoughts on who might be trying to so publicly ruin her before her career could have even begun.
Flexibility:
In general, I'm happy to change details, twist around mechanics, and even provide whole new characters to better facilitate flow of play and a reasonably harmonious player group. The latter, though, is a bit of an extreme case.



