Request for Review
If possible, could a few of the experienced (or, indeed, inexperienced) DMs out there cast their eyes over this ad I'm planning to put up, please, and let me know your thoughts, comments and criticism? It would be much appreciated. Many thanks in advance.
Now, you might think from that introduction that you're going to be on the side of the Army and the Lawkeepers, tasked with restoring law and order to the battered city of Meresford. Right? Wrong. You are not on the side of the law, not in the slightest. Now, that's not to say that you're one of those actively trying to bring the entire government down in flames (although you might be), but you're certainly someone who doesn't mind stepping on the wrong side of the law in one way or another. And you each have a connection, however tenuous, to the Red Brotherhood, the largest criminal gang in the city. You might be a fence they use, or a member of the gang, or just a criminal with a reputation for being skilled in your area of expertise. Heck, you might even be a double agent working for the
Lawkeepers tasked with infiltrating the Brotherhood. The choice is yours. But somehow the Red Brotherhood has decided that you are ideally suited for a job, and they've contacted you through the usual channels, to ask or order you to come to a small, unremarkable house in the Nelton West district of Meresford. What the job could be is anyone's guess...but it is almost certain the Law is not going to like it.
Now, you might think from that introduction that you're going to be on the side of the Army and the Lawkeepers, tasked with restoring law and order to the battered city of Meresford. Right? Wrong. You are not on the side of the law, not in the slightest. Now, that's not to say that you're one of those actively trying to bring the entire government down in flames (although you might be), but you're certainly someone who doesn't mind stepping on the wrong side of the law in one way or another. And you each have a connection, however tenuous, to the Red Brotherhood, the largest criminal gang in the city. You might be a fence they use, or a member of the gang, or just a criminal with a reputation for being skilled in your area of expertise. Heck, you might even be a double agent working for the
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