Poor Larin. :( But great story! Well done!

My favorite bit was...

the image of the hellhound incinerating arrows before they could hit it. That was cool. Or, rather, hot.

Ha ha thanks both of you. In my original before Farland had fully edited it, my friend's favorite line was "Sadly, two elves perished." I'm not sure if it is in the fully edited site one.

Ha ha thanks both of you. In my original before Farland had fully edited it, my friend's favorite line was "Sadly, two elves perished." I'm not sure if it is in the fully edited site one.