Alright so after reading the responses I agree with some things, can't fix others, and will be better the next time around. So to address some of the problems.
Sound: This needs a mic, Barsavis, thanks for the mic lead. I will be looking into it. Dubbing and recording sound after the fact is too much work at the moment due to the time constraints that the people I work with have. This is next on my list though.
Lighting:Nope, equipment is expensive and bulky to get even close to right. If I get funded sure. Until then I work with what I have.
Camera Work and quality of the Shots: This is the one thing were I go "My bad, I suck" First time behind a camera and focusing more on trying to get all the action in instead of the important parts. Next episode will be leaps and bounds better then this one.
Locations: HAHAHAHAHA, I take what I can get when I can get it. A friend's apartment, the theatre I used to work at. When I can get a location I use it. No budget and few connections makes getting good locations hard. With better camera work though I may be able to hide it. So it does not offend.
Acting: I have what I have. While I would love to have more rehearsal time my actors live in LA, we shoot in Fullerton, I live in Mira Loma. Travel and time constraints kill the rehearsal time. Also the first episode is always a bit shaky as actors find their characters.
Clarity: Alright, I will make a confession here as well. I am trying for something different. Overall it is a urban fantasy, action and drama. Now I like moments of light brevity to break up heavier scenes. It is actually a way of pacing a show. Romance is only hinted at and scouted around for the moment.
Accessibility: It will be going to it's own website in about a month or two with the rest of One Among Many Productions launch material. That coming together has been harder then organizing the show let me tell you.
Sound: This needs a mic, Barsavis, thanks for the mic lead. I will be looking into it. Dubbing and recording sound after the fact is too much work at the moment due to the time constraints that the people I work with have. This is next on my list though.
Lighting:Nope, equipment is expensive and bulky to get even close to right. If I get funded sure. Until then I work with what I have.
Camera Work and quality of the Shots: This is the one thing were I go "My bad, I suck" First time behind a camera and focusing more on trying to get all the action in instead of the important parts. Next episode will be leaps and bounds better then this one.
Locations: HAHAHAHAHA, I take what I can get when I can get it. A friend's apartment, the theatre I used to work at. When I can get a location I use it. No budget and few connections makes getting good locations hard. With better camera work though I may be able to hide it. So it does not offend.
Acting: I have what I have. While I would love to have more rehearsal time my actors live in LA, we shoot in Fullerton, I live in Mira Loma. Travel and time constraints kill the rehearsal time. Also the first episode is always a bit shaky as actors find their characters.
Clarity: Alright, I will make a confession here as well. I am trying for something different. Overall it is a urban fantasy, action and drama. Now I like moments of light brevity to break up heavier scenes. It is actually a way of pacing a show. Romance is only hinted at and scouted around for the moment.
Accessibility: It will be going to it's own website in about a month or two with the rest of One Among Many Productions launch material. That coming together has been harder then organizing the show let me tell you.