Basil, I like that concept! A couple of adjustments...
They rule a smaller part of the desert near the mountains of Iruladdun (the forest on the other side of the mountains could be where the elven nation was(?) where their exodus began. Perhaps put both of the cities you mentioned closer to/in that region of Iruladdun. Gonna try and keep the areas mentioned in kingdom information in tact for now (so the one region you mentioned would be undead controlled).
This is good stuff man!
They rule a smaller part of the desert near the mountains of Iruladdun (the forest on the other side of the mountains could be where the elven nation was(?) where their exodus began. Perhaps put both of the cities you mentioned closer to/in that region of Iruladdun. Gonna try and keep the areas mentioned in kingdom information in tact for now (so the one region you mentioned would be undead controlled).
This is good stuff man!