This is my very first Pathfinder story. I hope you enjoy. Feel free to critique my story. Whatever if it's positive or negative. Ok on to the story.
Chapter 1
In a magicial world of Arcadia, where all types of races lived. Humans, elves, dwarfs, halfings, gnome, half-elves, half-orcs lived. Their a mansion lived in a town of Vex. The people who lived in this mansion are a family of humans know as the Pentacles. The Pentacles are very wealthy and materalistic family in Vex. There was a male human wizard named David Pentacles. Who's very tall, muscular, very light skinned, heavy build, he also got black short hair. In addition he got a beard and mustache. There was also his wife Miranda Pentacles who was also a wizard. She was also tall, light build, was also very light skinned, her hair was black and long. They have a son, Kenny Pentacles, he's a commoner. He's 14 years old. He's tall but not as tall as his parents, he's light skinned, light build, he also got short black hair as his father. They have a daughter, Sarah Pentacles. She's 13 years old and she's also a commoner. The youngest member of the family. She's also the shortest. She's light skinned, light build, She also got long black hair just like her mother.
It was daytime, the parents were ready to go on an adveuture.
"Ok kids, Your dad and I are going on an adventure. We're going to fight a great wyrm blue dragon named Nicolius. Kenny you're in charge of the house. You have to take care of your sister where we're on an adventure. Food is in the kitchen. You can invited your friends to the house. Oh yeah one more thing, No you're not allowed to have a party in this house, Understood?" asked Miranda with a stern look.
"Yes I understand. I'm going to take care of my sister and the house. And their won't be any parties whatsoever." said Kenny as he abide his mother rules.
"I wish I can go to adventure with both of you." said Sarah as she frowned.
"You're still in your youth, Sarah. When you're 15, you can go to the adventure with on our next adventure." said David.
"I can't when you both of you come back home and tell us how both of you battling Nicolius and live to tell the tale." said Kenny full of optimism.
"We'll be fine, son. Remember what your mother said, take care of the house and your sister and absolutely no parties. Bye kids" said David as he and Miranda left the mansion to go on the adventure to fight Nicolius the great wyrm blue dragon. Kenny and Sarah greeted farewell to their parents.
"Well my friends will be here about an hour." said Kenny.
"I get some food at the kitchen and eat." said Sarah as she went to the kitchen.
TO BE CONTINUED
So what do you think of Chapter 1 so far. I love to here your comments.