Ohayo! I was just wanting to know what everyone thinks so far about the current releases of The Barbarian Trials, written by me. I need the feedback so I can improve my writing and eventually bring you all better stories eventually. Thanks.

I like it so far. I'm curious to find out what the thing is at the end of the last story. Is it a hell hound?

I like it so far. I'm curious to find out what the thing is at the end of the last story. Is it a hell hound?

Well, it could be it coudln't be. You jsut have to read the 4th part once it is published. *Gets back to writing and drinking Faygo*

Well, it could be it coudln't be. You jsut have to read the 4th part once it is published. *Gets back to writing and drinking Faygo*

I like it so far. I liked the cold spear and the fight with the Ettins. Some more description would be nice in the important spots, like the fights, but over all it's good.

I like it so far. I liked the cold spear and the fight with the Ettins. Some more description would be nice in the important spots, like the fights, but over all it's good.

Thanks Galadwen. In the fourth installment I will be sure to add some more detail. I might goto my friends apartment this weekend and spend the weekend with him becuse Hurricane Rita is coming in Friday night/Saturday Monring and I'm taking my computer with me along with my gamecube. I don't want them to fly away. Well my biology teacher said that we should goto a real house since I live in a mobile home. So I'm either going to be A)Playing WoW this weekend or B)Writing or C) Reading

Thanks Galadwen. In the fourth installment I will be sure to add some more detail. I might goto my friends apartment this weekend and spend the weekend with him becuse Hurricane Rita is coming in Friday night/Saturday Monring and I'm taking my computer with me along with my gamecube. I don't want them to fly away. Well my biology teacher said that we should goto a real house since I live in a mobile home. So I'm either going to be A)Playing WoW this weekend or B)Writing or C) Reading

I vote for writing!

Good luck with the storm.

:)