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Exile's Character Applications

Exile's Character Applications

This will be a thread dedicated to some of the character applications I am most proud of.


Table of Contents1) Aaron Nilo
2) Jestat Aldori
3) Horble Johk
4) Andrion Manes
5) Haanzo Hartok, The Piercing Storm
6) William "Jack" Johnson Junior
7) Nathan Surtova

InfoFor: Pathfinder Adventure Council of Thieves
Run by: fenixphire
Starting Level: 1
Status: Not accepted

Name: Aaran Nilo
Race: Human
Age: 23
Class: Rogue

InfoFor: Pathfinder Adventure, Kingmaker
Run by: ABCoLD
Starting Level: 1
Status: Accepted

Jestat Aldori
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Desired Positions (In Order): Ruler, Master Assassin, General, Spymaster
Character Concept: Disgraced pretend Swordlord seeking redemption and revenge.

DescriptionJestat Aldori is a striking young man, barely into his twenties; with shoulder length, mahogany hair and eyes to match. He's of average height, but more slender than most. He's clean shaven and his face bears no blemish. His leather armor is only slightly faded and bears few signs of battle. Most of his tools seem to have been bought secondhand or have seen heavy use. The only possession he has that seems as if it's seen any true care is the Aldori Dueling Sword safely tucked away in it's scabbard and wrapped in his blanket.

TraitsSword Scion:
You have been brought up up on tales of Baron Sirian Aldori and the exploits of the heroic and legendary swordlords. You idolize the heroes, styles, and philosophies of the Aldori and have sought to mimic their vaunted art.
(Benefit: You begin play with an Aldori dueling sword and gain a +1 trait bonus on all attacks and combat maneuvers made with such weapons.)

Blessed with good looks, you've come to depend on the fact that others find you attractive.
(Benefit: You gain a +1 trait bonus when you use Bluff or Diplomacy on a character that is (or could be) sexually attracted to you, and a +1 trait bonus to the save DC of any language-dependent spell you cast on such characters or creatures.)

CrunchCG Human Rogue, Level 1, Init +3, HP 11/11, Speed 30ft
AC 15, Touch 13, Flat-footed 12, Fort +2, Ref +5, Will +0, Base Attack Bonus 0
Short Swords (2) +3 (1d6, 19-20 x2)
Short Bow (10 Arrows) +3 (1d6 x3)
Leather Armor (+2 Armor, +3 Dex)
Abilities Str 10, Dex 17, Con 14, Int 13, Wis 10, Cha 14

infoFor: Pathfinder Homebrew, Unwilling Travelers
Run by: Doby
Starting Level: 2
Status: Accepted, Withdrawn
"I used to be an adventurer like you, then I took an arrow to the knee. Come to think of it, I'm still an adventurer... Just with a pretty bad limp."
Horble Johk, Adventurer
Horble Johk
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Class: Fighter (Free Hand Archetype) 2
Concept: Crippled and retired adventurer returning to the life.

DescriptionHorble is a man of average height and weight with brown hair and matching eyes. His posture is upright and he doesn't slouch. When speaking, Horble is exceptionally polite and he attempts to remain respectful to those who show him the same kindness. When he moves, it's obvious that his left leg doesn't bend. It sways away from his body a bit as he uses his cane for support. However, his hobbled movement belays his lithe and agile form and Horble is surprisingly quick on his feet even without the support of his cane.

CrunchCG Human Fighter (Free Hand), Level 2, Init +3, HP 24, Speed 20 ft
AC 18, Touch 14, Flat-footed 14, Fort +5, Ref +3, Will +0 BAB +2
Masterwork Cane (Silver Cane) +5 (1d6+2) x2
Masterwork Cane (Cold Iron Blade) +5 (1d6+2) x2
Short Sword +4 (1d6+2) 19-20 / x2
Light Crossbow +5 (1d8) 19-20 / x2
Mithril Chain Shirt +4 AC, +6 Max Dex
Abilities STR 14 DEX 16 CON 14 INT 10 WIS 10 CHA 10

InfoFor: Pathfinder Adventure, Carrion Crown
Run by: Ghardi
Starting Level:2
Status: Accepted
"I inter you now, into the earth, that your body may never rise. I pray for you now, in somber tones, that your spirit may never haunt. May your soul find peace in the final embrace of the Lady of Graves."

Excerpt of Funeral Rights, The Bones Land in a Spiral
Andrion Manes
Gender: Male
Age: 31
Character Concept: Fearless Undead Hunter / Party Healer

DescriptionAndrion is an imposing and grizzled man. A seemingly permanent scowl is affixed to his face and his dark brown eyes glare menacingly at anyone who looks his direction for too long. His head is hairless, but his facial hair is stubbled and grey. His face bears a few scars of varying shapes and sizes, though no one mark dominates his appearance. He's of average height and weight with only the slightest bit of muscle about him. Prayers to Pharasma are etched into his shield and his armor and, were he to remove his trappings, many of those same prayers and symbols can be seen tattooed on his chest, back, and arms.

TraitsSubject of Study (Undead):
Professor Lorrimor approached Andrion as part of his studies, as he had heard of his ordeal with his wife and her undead nature. Interested in the conditions of the run-in and the means by which Manes survived, he met with the priest and maintained correspondence until several months ago. The scars of Andrion's first encounter (both physical and emotional), and the professor's continual reminders of it, prompted Andrion to hone his skills to hunt the very creature his wife had become. The professor assisted him in this endeavor, providing Andrion with insight into the anatomy and defenses of the undead. Years of study and practice have improved Andrion's combat effectiveness against his chosen foe.
(Benefit: Gain a +1 bonus on damage rolls against creatures of the Undead type.)

Andrion's life has been brutal, yet he has persevered primarily though force of will and faith in the fact that no matter how hard things might get, as long as he keeps a level head he'll make it through.
(Benefit: Gain a +2 trait bonus on saving throws against fear effects.)

CrunchNG Human Cleric / Ranger, Level 1 / 1, Init +0, HP 16/16, Speed 20ft
AC 18, Touch 10, Flat-footed 18, Fort +6, Ref +2, Will +5, Base Attack Bonus +1
Masterwork Silver Heavy Mace +3 / +5 vs undead (1d8+1) / (1d8+4 vs undead) x2
Cold Iron Longsword +3 / +5 vs undead (1d8+1) / (1d8+4 vs undead) 19-20x2
Light Crossbow +1 (1d8)
Breastplate Armor (+6 Armor)
Heavy Steel Shield (+2 Armor)
Abilities Str 12, Dex 10, Con 14, Int 10, Wis 16, Cha 13

InfoFor: Pathfinder Homebrew, Dark Tower
Run by: HellFencer
Starting Level: 8
Status: Accepted.

Haanzo Hartok, the Piercing Storm
Race: Half-Orc
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Class and Level: Fighter (Polearm Master) 8
Concept: Imposing yet stoic half-orc fighter of great skill. (The silent warrior type.)

DescriptionTall, dark, and not-so-handsome, Haanzo is an imposing specimen, even for one with Orcish blood. His features seem almost bestial and his war cries are guttural and primal. His flesh is heavily scared, having seen more firsthand battle than many small armies combined and each is a testament to his ability to survive the worst conditions. Under the scars are layers upon layers of muscle, forged like steel through the fires of battle and honed with constant training. His eyes show an intelligent gleam that his mouth never betrays, for Haanzo remains utterly silent in all but the most necessary of situations, preferring to communicate through his actions or with subtle facial expressions.

HistoryHaanzo's history is a long and rarely told affair. Mainly because Haanzo doesn't speak, but also because some stories are simply better left untold. Suffice it to say that Haanzo traveled the same paths that many before him, and many after, have traveled. However, his story is his own and the path yet before him is one just as winding and full of intrigue as the one that's passed thus far.


InfoFor: Pathfinder Homebrew, Dawn Over a New World
Run by: uberDice
Starting Level: 1
Status: Withdrawn
"What is Dawngate? Fortune and glory, kid... Fortune and glory."
"Jack" Johnson, Treasure Hunter
William "Jack" Johnson Junior
Race: Half-Orc
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Class: Rogue
Concept: Indiana Jones type with a twist. "Treasure Hunter" looking for a new life in the new world.

DescriptionThe Half-Orc, William "Jack" Johnson Junior is small and scrawny for a Half-Orc, but only average size for a human male. His eyes are deep brown and his head is devoid of hair. Jack's skin is tanned a dark brown and bears a nearly literal roadmap of his past scrapes and expeditions in the form of a few tattoos and various scars. All in all, Jack could easily pass for a less-than-attractive human.

His clothes are shoddy and patched over in places as most of his money went toward his gear, drink, and women. As unseemly and unkept as Jack may appear, though, he keeps good hygiene and takes care that all his adventuring gear at least remains in working condition.

TraitsRich Parents:
"Now, hopefully, you'll make something of yourself and stop being such a damned fool." That's all Jack's father said to him as Jack was led shackled aboard the prison ship 'Bound for Glory'. When they docked in Landfall, Jack was released and given the small fortune his father had sent him away with.
Benefit: Your starting coin increases to 300 GP.

Jack spent many years studying in his father's shadow. The many dusty tomes he read as a child about ancient and lost civilizations has given him insight into the subjects of history and the arcane.
Benefit: You gain a +1 trait bonus to Knowledge (Arcana) and Knowledge (History) checks and Knowledge (Arcana) is always a class skill.

StatblockWilliam 'Jack' Johnson Jr.
Male CN Half-Orc Rogue, Level 1, Init +2, HP 10/10, Speed 30
AC 15, Touch 12, Flat-footed 13, Fort +3, Ref +5, Will +3, Base Attack Bonus 0
Falchion +3 (2d4+3, 18-20/x2)
Short Sword +3 (1d6+3, 19-20/x2)
Shortbow (10 Arrows) +2 (1d6, x3)
Studded Leather Armor (+3 Armor, +2 Dex)
Abilities Str 16, Dex 14, Con 14, Int 10, Wis 14, Cha 10

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EDIT: I was really hoping to be able to have all of my applications in the same place, though (without them all in the same post). Is that possible?

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