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  1. It might be worthwhile in extending the montage for a day. We need to fix the ship. Sell/buy cargo. Rest/ heal. Decide where we are going next.
  2. Atus hung his head in apparent shame, staring at the words he scorched into the deck as if they appeared by magic, "I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Dajel just dropped me." he said in a quiet voice looking up at his companions, "I didn't have any control over where I landed. She did drop me on the ship at least and not into the green sea or onto an unsuspecting citizen. So at least I only damaged the Argos a little. I mean, she could have thrown me at the Spire, like an cannonball, so it was actually quite kind of her when you think about it. It's just a little damage. I can fix it, won't take long, I promise." He looked back down at the words and drawing and gave a huge smile, "I did get a clue concerning the Bloom and she gave me a chart,"'he tapped the side of his head, "In here. Does anyone recognize the burned tallshank that looks like a cyclone? Also, I am feeling ... " Atus raised his palms to his waist and with barely an audible sound of his heart spinning, a thick band of lightning arced between them for a moment and he grins. "re-energized." If no one responds and they all head belowdecks, Atus will start fixing the damage.
  3. Got it. I felt doing the conversation in song allowed more freedom and creativity in your response. The reason Atus immediately scorched the words into the boards... because I do wonder who was at the top of the tower. The guard mentioned 'supplicants'. Which I interpret as Atus not being the only Tempest who wanted to commune with Dajel. So it makes me wonder, did the other supplicants see Atus get picked up by the storm? Did they see/hear/feel/sense in some way what happened? Will they come looking? Do they feel cheated, curious etc? Just trying to enable the emerging plot hooks as much as I can.
  4. Atus sat up, 'Ow' tracing an idle tendril of smoke that rose from his body until the tendril became lost in the driving rain. He could hear several raindrops sizzle at they hit his metal skin, and he knew he probably reeked of ozone and seared metal. He rolled to his knees, "Ow', and then took his finger and scorched into the unbroken boards the full message given to him by Dajel. Beside it he sketched the image seared into him, the burned and cyclonic shaped tallshank, with the thunderstorm nearby raining books and scrolls. He muttered to himself all the while, punctuated with an occasional groan, completely focused on his task at hand and ignoring everything and everyone around him. After a few minutes of busy scorching, Dajel's words and vision were writ large, taking up a lot of space on the deck. Dajel's Answer "The spark, a tempest, it thinks it be, The past and future it hopes to see, If the spark, a storm like me, Then past and future shall be thee. First for roots that stretch below; The thunder's gale an undertoe, The whirlwind snared by deadly foe, To free would strike Bloom a blow. Then for stars that burn and sear, One that fell, then lost to years. From its passage come your fears, Born, the beast, from pain and tears." With that done, Atus sat back on his heels and rubbed his chin, with a sound like hardened metal scratching at hardened metal before giving a joyful laugh. Two clues from Dajel, one about the Bloom and one about my past. The second stanza, that's the clue about the Bloom. Atus touched the drawing he'd made. A physical location? He felt that was right, which meant the third stanza was about him. He tried to make sense of it and failed to immediately appreciate its nuance, but his gaze lingered on the last line. The beast? That sounds ... prophetic. Am I meant to be the beast? It was at this moment that he seemed to become more aware of his surroundings, his eyes resting on the damage he'd caused to the ship. "Ah rust it!" he said in apparent frustration and began turning towards the ship workshop for materials to repair the damage. It was then he spotted Park and a Gau he didn't recognize. "Sorry. I damaged the ship. I'll just...."
  5. "Oh rhyming spark of future storm, The shattered sky has not been born. Your origin you say you seek; Pray choose one, your soul too weak. That which birthed you, with lightning true; Or that which looms; the Tyrant's Bloom. Past or future, there is only one; Which answer would you see be done?" Atus' mind and body sang with the words of the storm clasping him to her heart. The words washed over him and through him. He could feel the concern, but the limiting reply gave him pause. To receive an answer about his past would be wonderful, but would it be selfish to pursue his own ends at the cost of information about the Bloom, which would help his crew? Then there was the worrying line about a soul too weak. Atus wondered, if the storm thought him too weak, how could he be ready to face the Bloom and guardian for the answers he sought? He raised his voice again in song to convey his answer. I am the link between past and future, I am the present. Temper me. With no past, no chart to navigate the future, Temper me. If too weak to receive both, then, Temper me. Help me fight for my dreams Temper me. Heat my steel with your fire, Temper me. If I pass, a boon I ask, answers true. He knew he risked a lot in his response, but if felt like the only way he might get answers about his past and maybe help with the search for the Bloom as well..
  6. Oh I thought you fixed it. When I first looked at your last post it was cut off just after the Park section. When I looked at it six hours later it was all there.
  7. As the storm lifted him high into the air, Atus felt a surging elation, bubbling inside him like effevescent fizz. He could not help but express his joy, laughing, as the storm drew him upwards into its heart. With the push and pull of electromagnetics, not an unfamiliar experience when playing with storms, he noticed the more deliberate nature of this storm and listened intently, his whole body like a tuning fork. When the words of the storm became clear to him he laughed again with pure joy, his mind racing with the best way to respond. He raised his voice, his thoughts, the entirety of himself tuned to the electromagnetic tuning fork of his metal body and sent out a powerful message in the form of a song. Stormchild born of lightning, unique and alone, why does the heart of a storm feel like home? Bloom Seeker, Monster Grim Reaper, looking for answers and sign, want to know, how to follow, a trail lost in time? Answes elude me, dreaming of family, one I've never known, lost and alone. Little raincloud you call me, endearing and sweet, to your heart you hold me, cradled next to your beat. Are you part of the answer I seek? Atus waited, feeling extremely vulnerable and hoping for some kind of answer but willing to receive anything in return.
  8. "Thank you." Atus said simply to the guard as they let him pass the gate. When he reached the platform he knew he was high enough, but higher was always better. To feel the shifting ions up close. There was nothing quite like it. When he went inside, the confusing room with its pile of corpses and sleeping guard held no interest. He could feel the storm approaching. He wanted past the trap door and was about to wake the sleeping guard when he felt the storm shift in a most peculiar way. A peal of loud thunder, strong enough that he could feel the vibration in the floor beneath his feet, made his heart spin faster, audible, and he realized that he was out of time. The platform would have to do. The crackling electricity around him reached a new level when the guard spoke to him. Atus shook his head at the question. "It is a bad idea to come outside. It could be deadly for you." he said and left by the way he entered. He drank in the view of the fast approaching storm in admiration. Such darkness, evoking a sense of anger and his heart span faster again. Unknown to him, above him in the sky and largely invisible against the backdrop of an overcast sky, a massive rose coloured sprite winked into existance for a heartbeat. He felt the irresistable need to commune with the storm and his heart spun faster again as he raised his hands and answered her thunder with lightning shooting into the sky, accompanied by a crack of thunder. "That should get her attention." OOC ; I am going to burn a whisper to commune with Dajel.
  9. I have the questions... * The platform - Does Atus think he is high enough to interact with the storm from this height? * The Mothryn - Does he/she look like another guard or something else? * The lever - Can he use his rattle skill to quickly ascertain the purpose?
  10. Atus dimly acknowledged the presence of Tolliver and Tharr, but only realized they had peeled off from his path when he found himself walking alone. Before it really registered with him he stood in front og the chatty Gau with her Pre-V rifle amd torrent of confusing words. Supplicant. Perhaps other Tempests are treading the same path. Atus thought to himself as one word registered. He felt like too much information was coming at him from too many directions. The storm spoke to him in loud tones. He could feel her power already stretching out across the heavens. The interplay of ions. The glorious charging and tumultuous movement of air and shifting power. "Dajel... " Atus said. the name escaping him like whispered steam from a boiler. Atus shook his head, the words of the Gau slowly penetrating what passed for his conscious mind. With difficulty Atus focused his glowing eyes on the Gau. "Dajel comes. An hour at most. I must be higher to commune properly. If I stay here... If Dajel speaks to me... You will be in danger. Lighning all around... So good." Atus looked at the clouds again and the approaching storm. Sparks were thrown off his shoulders and down to the ground, as if he wore a cape of trailing sparks, that glinted off his metallic skin and made his form sparkle. The smell pf ozone around him became stronger. "Trophy?" Atus pointed to the Argos. "Not enough time to get to the Argos and back before Dajel comes. I am Atus Zolev. Tempest." Atus waved his hands and sparks formed shapes in the air around him. The outline of Cuda with its toothy maw. The spark picture changed and showed a tiny Biff shooting into the air above the Cuda to recreate the moment of its death. "I killed the Cuda that hunted the Firefly and consumed half their crew. I channelled the stormrail and my bolts arced inside the beast and I felt the touch of its spirit venom. It tried to consume my soul. Yet with the help of my friends we prevailed." Atus ended the sparkshow and brought forth the sample of Cuda spirit venom he carried and showed it to the Gau. "A sample of the Cuda venom as proof of my claim. Ask any of the crew of the Firefly to verify. Or wait until after Dajel passes and I will take you to the Argos. You can taste the flesh, and see the remains in our cargo hold. You may test my strength if you feel the need. Or claim anything but the venom to ease my passage. " Atus showed the Gau everything on his person, the chart, small music box, scratch and salvage. "Please, she lands soon." OOC: Atus hopes to convince the Gau to let him pass.
  11. When Atus stepped upon the dock, the sights and sounds of Deathblossom quarter held no interest for him. The beautiful clouds called him more powerfully than the Manticore's siren song. Sparks curled around his shoulders like the hands of a lover, wishing to drag him away, yet the thought of his crewmates and their needs came to him and he felt an explanation was needed. "Tharr, Tolliver, Park. I... I need the storm that approaches. I... " Atus' voice is a curious mixture of longing and shame. "We came to help Tolliver and find our path forward, but the storm. It calls to me. I can feel the approach. I.. I must seek the heart of the storm and listen. It has been too long since I felt a storms embrace. I wiĺl find you when it is over." Atus seems as jittery as a drug addict needing a fix. With those words he raises his glowing eyes to the storm cloud heavens and begins to move away, heading in the general direction of the Spire. He smells like ozone, and his spinning heart can faintly be heard, as electricity randomly appears across his body. The electricity is joined by muttering. Words like "more altitude", "South by Southwest,". "She approaches heavy-laden with power." Most of his attention seems elsewhere from the here and now. Only tangitallly connected to reality. Enough that he will avoid any obstacles that won't get out of his way, like buildings or plants. OOC: Atus is taking an explore action. He will commune with the storm, climbing the Spire as far as possible.
  12. You didn't mention the approaching thunderclouds/ storm. I imagine a giant Spire would attract a lot of lightning as it stirs the clouds and act like a massive earthing rod. Purely from a character perspective, Atus would probably want to get as high up the mountain as he can to see/ interact with the storm. i guess I think a good lightning storm is like a day spa for Atus, making him feel refreshed and centered. I am hoping he can get struck by lightning, dancing with the storm. Crunch wise I am not sure what this would achieve. If there was time in this montage... he would take a small sample of the spirit venom and try to commune with the storm... a spirit journey using lightning as a medium. Just a thought.
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