@KhakhanBahahaha
As for everyone else, hopefully, they can see the pictures. I've gotten one positive verification, but if not, please feel free to post it here or in a message. There are a few back and forths going on in this discussion so I'm staying somewhat hands-off to let RP live. But if you want me to post an NPC interjection, I'll be happy to do so.
While this is going a bit slower than I expected (no complaint, it's been a while since I've run a game, and I've never done a mystery game on PBP, so we're figuring things out on the fly), I am pleased with the breakdown of discoveries and the interesting choices by the characters.