Good story, lots of potential leads there. Only thing I would mention, is as discussed with other applicants, Niska's passing has not yet occured. This will be played out in game.
Mechanically:
- Should have 2 bonus languages, only 1 is filled in
- +1 trait bonus on perception (from Friend of the Family campaign trait) not applied to skill table
- HP: 8 (max d8) +2 (con mod) +1 (FCB) = 11
- scribe scroll bonus feat not recorded
- bardic performance, cantrips, countersong, fascinate, inspire courage +1 class features not recorded
- Skill points should be 6 +2 (Int mod) +2 (Background) = 10
- Bard spells known should be 4 cantrips and 2 1st. I see 5 cantrips, not sure where that extra cantrip is coming from
- Bonus spells per day not recorded
- Also don't see where there was dice rolled for wealth?
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No clothes (Oh my...
) and no adventuring equipment?
