Story-wise:
Cool name! Good story, no questions on Rain herself. Jerry though, Jerboas seem to exist primarily in warm deserts... Any thoughts as to how one had come to be here all the way up in Numeria? That said, I'm not opposed to you taking that species as a spirit animal.
Mechanics-wise:
- Character details (like name and such) not filled in on character sheet
- Could you point me to a source for the Frontier Survivor alternate racial trait please? I'm not seeing it on aonprd.
- Birthmark is a Faith trait (no biggie, just semantics)
- Guessing the Technologist bonus feat is from campaign trait Local Ties?