Some things that I wouldn't mind seeing developed further:
What hero did Bright Star's future self do battle with? Why did they fight? What was the outcome of the fight?
What does Bright Star most admire about her future self? Why does Bright Star fear becoming her future self? If she did, what would that path look like?
Are any members of the Freedom Finders still alive? Who are they? Has Bright Star met them yet? What is the status in their war against the Tangee? What kind of hero do they want Bright Star to be?
All in all, solid effort. I would like to see what more you can come up with.