Rudolf

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Yes, I’m suggesting a vest of resistance is better than a cloak of resistance.
 

Grapple is under saves, between range and melee. Too bad it’s not automatic.
 

Also this:

Masterwork Thieves’ Tools

This kit contains extra tools and tools of better make, which grant a +2 circumstance bonus on Disable Device and Open Lock checks.

It’s fine. Make the changes and you’re set.
 

official feedback:

• Your thieves’ tools are adding to your Diplomacy check. Shift down please. Do they also help Open Lock?
• Grapple on sheet needs to be filled out.
• Will the picture work on the sheet? There’ a spot for it.
• Can you add the flaws to the sheet also, with a quick description.

personal 2cp:

• Do you want a vest of resistance instead? There are other good cloaks.
• You only do piercing damage. Club? Sap?
• potion of clw never hurt anyone.

The priest appears shocked. “There is no grave, there cannot be one without a body to bury.”

“Let’s head south. I’ll follow you, Zalvan.”

We will discuss.

@Barrigan What’s your move?

@Sohala I knew Bloodlines were under mod review, but I didn’t know how the voting would go. They’re now gone.
 

Can I suggest a hellbred celestial instead?

Updates: 5/17/24

Shang packs everything back into its rightful place in his backpack. He found that if everythingnwas always in the same place, it was simpler.

“I have what I need.”

Link to sheet:

https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheets/?id=2887302

Iodás, who is no healer, ust has to wait while others see to their new companion, Daithan. After a while, it looks like he’ll live.
 

“Ok, looks safe enough now. Let’s take a look..” he adds beginning to take off his armor and helmet.

I think we’re as ready as we’re going to get.

Zeff has ‘throw rock’ as a race feature. Way more fun than arrows, so please don’t dump them out.

Ah, found the background! Things will go faster if you use the spoiler boxes, just so you know.

Can we get a personality and background, please? I’ll try and get my head around the mechanics.
 

I’d say it remains quarterstaff. A longstaff is -very- long.
 

character checks out otherwise, just needs a personality. I’m going to trust you to write one.
 

Approved!

Notes

• Grapple on the sheet should be one higher.
• Vest of resistance not factored into saves

Overall this looks ok, I’ll leave you to make the minor edits on your own. I recommend a side weapon; you don’t want the first creature with damage reduction to kill you. Right now, you can only do bludgeoning damage.
 

Approved!

Please remember the ‘ready for review’ flag when you’re done.