Warn the Faultless, Human Brawler

[Grudge]

 

Race:   Human                                            Age: 36                                    Height: 7'6"                         Deity: %

Name: Warn the Faultless                              Gender: Male                           Weight: 234 lbs.                   Eyes: Brown

Class:  Brawler                                            Alignment: CN                         Size: Medium                        Hair: Brown

 

 Race

Ability Score ModifiersHuman characters gain a +2 racial bonus to one ability score of their choice at the creation                                                                                              

SizeHumans are Medium creatures and thus receive no bonuses or penalties due to their size.

Base SpeedHumans have a base speed of 30 feet

LanguagesHumans begin play speaking Common. Humans with high Intelligence scores can choose any languages they want (except secret languages, such as Druidic)

Bonus FeatHumans select one extra feat at 1st level

SkilledHumans gain an additional skill rank at first level and one additional rank whenever they gain a level.

 

Edited May 12, 2023 by Grudge (see edit history)

[Eborne1]

Hi.  Welcome.  I should mention a couple things about your IC Post. 

#1 I encourage you to reread the opening "facility" description.  You've been in the facility for years and remember NOTHING prior.  Also, you're wearing only simple clothing that more or less matches everyone else.   

#2 Your IC post has about 50+lines of blank space beneath the last written line.  If you wouldn't mind editing it and deleting all that blank space, so the post window isn't so long and empty. 

Thank you.  

[Grudge]

26 minutes ago, Eborne1 said:

Hi.  Welcome.  I should mention a couple things about your IC Post. 

#1 I encourage you to reread the opening "facility" description.  You've been in the facility for years and remember NOTHING prior.  Also, you're wearing only simple clothing that more or less matches everyone else.   

#2 Your IC post has about 50+lines of blank space beneath the last written line.  If you wouldn't mind editing it and deleting all that blank space, so the post window isn't so long and empty. 

Thank you.  

Hey,

1) this is likely a misunderstanding from my side, I figured they show up in what they wore and without weapons. Considering he was almost naked and (as brawler) unarmed, I figured that's good enough, but that is easily fixed with some writing. However...

2) I just saw how long that empty space is and tried to Delete it in several ways. Nothing works. You have more experience with Baldr formatting. Any ideas?

[Eborne1]

Not a problem.  I'll see what I can do.  I think I have the ability to edit your post.  Edit:  It looks like you fixed it.  

Edited May 12, 2023 by Eborne1 (see edit history)

[Grudge]

31 minutes ago, Eborne1 said:

Not a problem.  I'll see what I can do.  I think I have the ability to edit your post.  Edit:  It looks like you fixed it.  

I copied everything and posted it on a fresh page, it was not perfect but it did solve that enormous gap.

[Eborne1]

You have a couple of days left to finish your application if you would like to be considered for the game. I will likely choose on the 2nd or 3rd of June.

[Eborne1]

Moving this character application to archive. Please let me know if you'd like to reinstate it